First, blog I was writing about solids,liquids,and gases i had the write answer but i should have expained myself more.Second, blog when i was writing i was explaining how the statue of liberty changed colors over the years. And i should have talked about the change it made and about the color of penny. I should have also explained more about penny.Third, blog i dont really talked about the right things and i really need to inprove on my paragraphs.Fourth, i talked about prompt i should explained myself more and give more explames. The other blog i think i really did a good ob on. I also explained my self and gave explames. And i also really liked the video and the things they had to build.
Blog 5 was my best because
i really liked it. And i would want to build something like them. I also understood what they was doing. When they was building they was also having fun and i liked to have fun. i also liked it because some of the other blogs was boring and i watched the video over and over. I also learned from that video that you can build instruments out of any tool. Thats why i think that was my best blog.
I can improve my writing by explaining myself more. I can also improve by reading my packets, and getting some answers from internet. Make sure i know what i am talking about when i am writing. Thats whyat i should toto improve my writing
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